The other world

The Other World

The characters in this story are: emma,tom








What is the place like? A cave








Who do the children meet? A monster








How did they get home? They ran








Useful descriptive words and phrases: having a strong desire for success or achievement.













The Other World

Emma and Tom are walking along the cliffs high above the sea when a very strange event takes place.

Emma looked ahead. Tom was there one minute and the next he was gone.
She ran to the spot shouting.
“Tom! Stop messing about.
Where are you?”
All of a sudden she felt herself falling downwards and with a thud she landed on the damp floor of a cave.

Tom was busy brushing mud and moss from his clothes.
“Where on earth are we?” asked Emma?
“I don’t know,” answered Tom, “but it sure feels very strange.”

They walked to the entrance of the cave and found themselves in a place unlike any they had ever seen before………...

One day I was walking with my friend then i heard a scary voice next i saw a big cave me and my friend went inside there and it was so dark and i heard the sound from in there then i went fuling in there and i saw a big monster then i was calling out loud because tom was missing so i starting to run to him but i couldn't find him because it was so dark so i was still running then i saw fire and i picked its up and i started to find him and he was hiding at the back of me and he scared me and it's was a so scary and i told him its not even funny then i told him let's go now so we ran fast and we were so lucky because he was trying to get us but we ran fast ass with my friend then we got outside and we said we are never going back inside there so we were walking back home and when i got back home i went to go eat then i went sleep and my friend went back home to.the end.